literature

The bottom hurts.

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I didn't want it to be this way.
But I trusted you, when you said "but I do."
So I went along with it.

I didn't want the memories.
But I have them now.
And they're all I think about.

I didn't want to fall for you.
But I did, and you promised to catch me.
You didn't. Now that I have hit the bottom.

It hurts.
Just something...

Let me know what you think, how can I improve. :)
That sort of thing :)
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DemreD's avatar
:iconsadplz:
I would like to invite you to my new group :iconteenage-inspiration:
It is a group created to share your art with the world. It's mainly for teenage artists (obviously :giggle:)
We would love to see your work there. :hug:
Demre