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Do you remember when,
our love was so innocent?
When smiles lit our faces,
and our eyes sparkled with awe?
Holding hand,was everything,
and everything was new?
Lying there picking out,
our song?
The secrets we whispered,
into the night?
The cuddling when nights,
were to scary for me?
Our first date, or how,
I blushed every second?
What about our first kiss,
the pure magic you felt?
It all meant something, right?
our love was so innocent?
When smiles lit our faces,
and our eyes sparkled with awe?
Holding hand,was everything,
and everything was new?
Lying there picking out,
our song?
The secrets we whispered,
into the night?
The cuddling when nights,
were to scary for me?
Our first date, or how,
I blushed every second?
What about our first kiss,
the pure magic you felt?
It all meant something, right?
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Love
Love.
Such a simple word
That has so much meaning.
We all have it
Even if we can't see it.
And we all give it to others.
So don't think you're unloved.
I can guarantee that's not true.
Someone out there loves you.
Even when you're all alone
Even in the darkest days.
Someone loves you.
When everything goes downhill
When darkness is all you see.
Someone loves you.
Someone always loves you
Because,
I love you.
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The Sweetest Letter
The boy who said he'd never cry,
Fell in love with the girl who was going to die.
She'd had cancer for over two years,
And that's when the boy first shed his tears.
Their love was stronger than any before,
It's too bad that they couldn't have more.
They stayed together for as long as they could,
Though that idea probably wasn't good.
The young boy knew he shouldn't have stayed,
But he just wouldn't go away.
He cared about his love too much,
His pain was lifted by her comforting touch.
Then one night his beauty died,
And the broken boy sat down and cried.
He'd never been so upset in his life,
But he refused to turn to the knife.
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Love
It's the song on the radio that reminds you of what you had and what you lost.
It's the smile that a baby gives when she is genuinely happy.
It's the sound of a laugh from someone who hasn't laughed in a long, long time.
It's the friend who still remembers you even if you call after fifteen years.
It's the last piece of chocolate saved for you in a box you thought was empty.
It's the gift that is exactly what you needed, when you needed it.
It's the two hour ride across town, just so she can see you before she leaves.
It's the dog who waits for you to come home, just to give you all the affection in the world.
It's the companionship o
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Yeah too many commas! The linebreak alone should slow down how the lines are read so you don't need commas to show pauses - that's the point of linebreaks!
I like how you keep asking questions, makes the poem really intimate
Also "were to scary for me?" needs changing to "too".
and "Holding hand,was everything," do you mean 'Holding hands was everything' ?
P.S. I don't like the word "cuddling" its not grown up enough for the feelings in the poem
I like how you keep asking questions, makes the poem really intimate
Also "were to scary for me?" needs changing to "too".
and "Holding hand,was everything," do you mean 'Holding hands was everything' ?
P.S. I don't like the word "cuddling" its not grown up enough for the feelings in the poem