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If I told you how I really felt,
You would see how much pain I'm in.
And if you saw how much pain I was in,
You would know how broken I am.
And if you knew how broken I was,

I wouldn't be the perfect girl you see me as.   
Does it make sense?
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Quolia Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Man...another one that just hits me hard :)

Keep up the awesome writing!
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HayleighElizabeth Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D x
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x-yukino-x Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
this is amazing short but lovely
very well written :heart: :hug:
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HayleighElizabeth Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thankyou :)
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Bebopboy Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
Yes nobody is perfect thats a judging word, just like normal 8-)
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HayleighElizabeth Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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tmacguitarchick Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
Yeah, this is amazing and it is completely true. Well done :)
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HayleighElizabeth Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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DanikaMilles Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Short simple and well written. And yes it makes perfect sense
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HayleighElizabeth Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:) thanks
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