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Eyes sparkling.

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Walking up the drive
I could hear music playing.
Our music, I smiled.

knocking on the door
I heard her yell out to me,
'Just a minute, please.'

The music softened
She opened the door smiling,
Ready to greet whoever.

'Hi' she said breathless.
'Hey, how's it going.' I asked.
'Still living.' she replied.

I walked in laughing
Her eyes sparkled like the ocean,
Only the colour of brown.

Her hair soft as snow
Mixed colours of brown and blonde,
Cascading down her.

She is beautiful
And shes lighting up the world,
One smile at a time.
Does it make sense?
Does it paint a picture?
What does it make you feel?
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Aifos96's avatar
it absolutely paint a pic, and it sure did make sence, great work!